We spent the majority of the class today watching and talking about each persons making of project. Editing is clear strength for many people on my course and from today class I really saw how everyone is at such a different levels when it comes to animation. I found today very useful but also very interesting as everyone took such a different route within their work.
I was nervous to show my work but at the end of the day I want to get feedback to make my work better and I learnt a lot just by doing this project. After looking at my feedback I noticed a lot of people liked that I had shown my experimentation within my work, showing what went well and what didn’t work so well, as it presented a process and small part of my design cycle. I also was praised for using a range of shots of work and that the music went well with the overall tone of my project. Although I was happy with these comments I also wanted to here how I could of improved and this was by changing the font color as at point in the video it was hard to read, so a black background would of been more helpful. I also should of used less time lapse as it does get a bit boring so Kris said why don’t I add in some cuts along the way so we don’t watch me draw the whole piece. I just need to think more about keeping the audience engaged throughout. I also want to work on my editing skills as now I know the basics it would good to progress and make my work more slick and fancy.
I made comments on each persons work here are some examples: